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Yes i am invisible sometimes
And so are my rhymes

O to be invisible!
Think of the things i could do!

The popular speak of this silently
When they want some privacy

I am invisible sometimes
Because i am not popular
Only those who seek a personality
As rare as me
Might be able to find me

You must blend in with me
Like a soldier in a tree
You may not see me at first
And if you do
You think
'Yes she belongs there,

But if you find me
In my fake jungle collage
Approach me
And you will see me

Once you know me
I will stand out
Like a cut on your knee

Once you know me
You’ll say
'She doesn’t belong there,
She will no longer stay'

Those who seek me
And know me
Will see me

Those who don’t
Can’t find me

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Comments (4)

I'm back! ! ! My name was hellp because my mother found my poems and back tehn i had poems that were alot more intense. about suicide, religion, and sex. My mom banned me from the site and made me delet all my poems. (my mom and family r VERY strong christians) i changed my name and deleted only some of my poems. My name was hellp cuz i felt like i was in hell and i REALLY needed help. i was so scared. I'v never been on the website for years and then i got an email today that sed i hada comment on one of my poems...i read all of the commments i missed and it totally inspired me to continue my poetry. I changed my name and i will try 2 pick up where i left off...i havn't written poetry since i got caught...thankyou so much for ur support
That's brilliant, really! You should be very proud of it, it's fantastic! : -) I really liked it
Great poem. Very powerfull. Especially the verses referring to the fact that people can find you if only they seek you. It is reminds of God in a way. He is everywhere but can only be felt and found by people who are willing to find Him. Well done HBH
Nice One.Thanks you.