Invisible Love

Dear Ocean of love in love you build,
With affection to universe you yield.
Field we get to stand with home run,
For lighting world wheel you tell sun.

By your command wind does dandle,
Father you are more to us you fondle.
Many ask how do you do this invisible,
They think and search in space unable.

Your thoughts vibrate us to get a boon,
Although we do not see we get it soon.
Unlimited strength comes to path show
Colours are spread in both sides rainbow.

Plants grow with touch of nature of rain
Leaves shake green grasses give of pain.
We hold in palms many memories of us,
You do shine in devotion ever in life thus.

Wonder creation you arrange dark matter,
Planets move in space there in far better.
Moon falls with calmness on the dark night,
Only your love father motivates in way right.

Light falls in life while we know souls we are,
Far sky smiles with love of sun dazzles star.
Invisible rope of love is spread across creation,
Oh father this binds all by power of emotion.

by Kumarmani Mahakul

Comments (5)

its really interesting poem- poet tried to get the pure love from nature, the best source of love /// great effort
This is a very soothing and spiritual breath of fresh air, it calms the soul while refreshing the mind with this invisible love. I enjoyed this poem very much. Thank you for sharing it, and thank you for reading and commenting on my poem: Seeing Leaves Dangle, I appreciate it. RoseAnn
Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.
Brilliant...spirituality drips through each line................liked it..thanks for sharing.
Although your English lacks the polish of a native speaker Kumarmani, your thoughts shine through. You do have a gift that I hope you will continue to exercise. I suspect you will really like the poems in the last contest I sponsored on my web site. Look for my poem there too called God''s Kind of Poetry. I especially liked 'Colours are spread in both sides rainbow' and 'Far sky smiles with love of sun dazzles star.' There are two groups of poems you should check out that will introduce you to some great poets on this site. Check out these poem titles on my site.... 'A Challenge Title Contest - 2014 Sept Entries - The Winners, ' 'A Challenge Title Contest - 2014 Sept Entries- The Poems - (Disqualified but Noteworthy) ', and 'A Challenge Title Contest - 2014 Sept Entries - PoetrySoup Winners 10 of 12' And consider writing a poem for the contest now in progress with a title of 'Words - The Heart of Imagination.'