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Iv Seen Your Smile,
DG (9/19/1963 / )

Iv Seen Your Smile,

IV seen your smile shine like
day,
iv seen your spirit fly away,
iv seen the proof in their
eyes,
still they point and criticise.
iv seen the worst and best,
iv seen it change just like
that,
iv seen the look in their eyes,
still they point and criticise.

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Comments (2)

DAVID...ANOTHER TRIP INTO GERARDINO'S WORLD OF THE ABSTRACT... ECCENTRICAL PIECE, WHICH CODDLES WELL TO MY OWN POETIC FLAVOUR...10! '''''''''FRANK
Someone will always criticise David, no matter what you do. I enjoyed this little ditty. Happy St. Patrick's Day. 10 from getting my iron! lol Tai