PR (8th january 1951 / newcastle upon tyne)

January Parting

I
Tried
Catching
Her tears
From sad
Pathetic eyes
But
They slowly
Trickled
Through my fingers
Dissolving the white unfeeling snow.

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you should try writing tanka or haiku. there is a feel of those elements in this poem.
Simply beautiful. One of a kind.