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Jason Be Hating

Jason why do you be hating!
Everytime I around you; you alway; s faking.
Boy! 'You need a role model.' Get something in life.
If I was you, I be trying to become someone!

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Jason...listen to Derrick...you need to stop hating...maybe start dating and look into mating because your hating is like fumes from painting...it has us all fainting lol! I'm sorry for that...I started feeling it a little bit lol...that wasn't good was it? But what was good was your poem! It has a sense of rawness in it that makes it purely honest. Good advice at the end for the antagonist. Top marks! -Michael