~~journey~~

I am in the middle of my journey
With the heavy basket behind
full with have and haven't

Can't wait
Can't go back

Can't untie the tag
Just running
Through this ordeal of chaos
Through the mist of faith
To reach the unknown end of distress.

(c) raju baruah'2010

by Raju Baruah

Comments (11)

journey without the bag of have and have nots is a futile one..its the chaos and ordeal which keep us on our toes to reach a non existing state of rest thats without chaos.. nicely framed! !
‘Chaos’ and ‘Mist of Faith’…a poetically pessimistic/optimistic attitude…what poets always are… ‘…To reach the unknown end of distress’ Here lies your skill here again in Lows…by ‘Unknown’…enjoyed … Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
maybe you should have named it 'life' coz the contents actually match up with an average life an average humankind.
very good. passionate.
GOOD GOD BLESS YOU I CAN APPLY THAT TO MY EVERYDAY LIFE
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