FO (19 Dec / Rawalpindi)

*just Take You In Right Way*

in the darkness of night when there is too silence
i have one pray to god just take you in right way

in the crowd of people when voices are high
i have one pray to god just take you in right way

in the rainy day when thunder is in sky
i have one pray to god just take you in right way

when happens are too much and i am feeling lonely
i have one pray to god just take you in right way

when good peoples are less and bad are much
i have one pray to god just take you in right way

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Comments (5)

Darkness, loud crowd, thunder and lightning, loneliness, bad people, then i pray to God. very very nice prayerful poem. i too pray when i am confronted with all these. thank you. you are becoming a divine poet. tony
Nice poem. Nice wishes and prayers.
This piece reminds me of my prayer partners. nice and well done.
The prayer is nice but all the groups think they are right whereas all others are wrong. So instead of blaming the majority we should find out the similarities for coexistence.
written beautifully may god listen to your prayer soon...............good work..............