Kaze Aoi

Somber torrents of death-laden wind
Carry the sad news of those that sinned
The inescapable currents hold those that the reaper may choose
And for those left dieing they have nothing to lose

by Timothy Weiermann

Comments (3)

all of your poems seem to be very dark and forboding, but in a good way, not the depressing emo kind, the beautiful eye opening kind.
Another excellent dark poem. Just....awesome... absolutely nice such a few lines -Tess C.
I really like your use of rhyme and word choice in this poem. Provocative theme...well written.