Kick Your Heels And Go
A friend of mine
Thought she is number one
She is living
In a beautiful house
by Rose Marie Juan Austin
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Frank James Davis
08 May 07:37
Sound advice. The woman will, it seems, be losing nothing of value. Fascinating read, Rose!
20 Feb 03:15
A very nice poem on a love story that became a fabrication. Very good advice, leave when you have got to go, kick your heels when the dream becomes a lie.
24 Nov 2018 05:19
It is really a beautiful poem on love having haunting expression with nice diction and it has special attraction towards readers for which I have to revisit it.
23 Jul 2018 12:46
She complements him In every aspect He promised She is the one The only one...........so touching with a nice theme regarding love. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10
22 Apr 2018 04:13
I told her The words she hates to hear Kick your heels And go. She deserved these words, enjoyed the poem.
07 Apr 2018 07:33
Go where you are wanted and loved. Nice writing.
Unnikrishnan E S
07 Apr 2018 10:48
Very nice poem. This is the most worthwhile advice to anyone, who refuses to understand that he/she is being taken for a ride. The last stanza is most well-phrased. Great.
12 Mar 2018 10:30
Hahaha ., i told her The words she hates to hear.,, Loveeeely manang ko Rose..
09 Mar 2018 03:44
She is slowly being killed By the emotional strife In her life. - - Marriage can be a prison at its worst..Vivid depiction and very realistic.Thanks for sharing with us.
10 Feb 2018 05:56
I told her The words she hates to hear Kick your heels And go. This is what I will advice to my friend(same situation) haha... :) Two thumbs up for this brilliant write..a shimmering 10ssssssss
20 Jan 2018 09:07
Good poem, thank you! Hahaha kick heels and go, sounds so simple yet such a complicated thing, so many millions of people should go, but in unloving relatioship keep. You are a good friend, keep helping her.
Dr Dillip K Swain
09 Jan 2018 12:23
She always brags/her man was smitten/by her loving ways/that she is the air/that he breathes. Lovely expression, a poem well dressed!
05 Jan 2018 11:49
Love shows emotional views in heart and chases us, , you have wonderfully penned, thanks for sharing the poem with us
04 Jan 2018 12:29
Devotion to others can often keep you from fulfilling the desires of life. Always better to let a fox go than to try and tame him. You're the only one who can find your true happiness. Your friend has a very wise friend. Thank you Rose.
02 Jan 2018 12:29
Some are blinded by love. Even though they know the truth they still deny it and live in self denial. Only a friend can tell them the words they dreaded to hear which is the truth. A well executed write Rose. Happy New Year! Nudershada