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Hurry Up! The Authorities Head This Way

Hurry Up! The Authorities Head This Way

Poem By Lawrence S. Pertillar

I'm gonna draw a picture,
a picture with a twist..
im gonna get a knife,
and draw it on my wrist..
If done properly a bloody fountain should appear,
and from that bloody fountain,
all my troubles wll disappear....

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This is one of my favortie poems that you've written. I've read it at least a 100 times. It's really powerful. I love it!
This is a really deep poem, this underlines how I feel sometimes. Thankyou so much for sharing XxAmie-LeexX
As far as I know, your troubles will start only then............it's perhaps the last thing one should think of doing. It leaves a scar for the rest of your life and why ever should anyone misuse their bodies thus? God meant it that we should live in peace and harmony.....arya
Normally cutting poems turn out horrible, and cliche, but damn. I think your the only one that wrote one that I accutly (sp?) like! Keep up the good work! I like your other stuff also!
This is a really great poem. Sad... but written with so much emotion and truth.


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