Haiku 'Winter Haiku'

Reflecting mirror,
frozen pond in bare garden
- I am day older...

by Peter S. Quinn

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One of my favorite poets. - - - - - - - - - -and, lifting one / wondrous shoulder from the evening gown, / she drinks quietly from her image. She drinks / what a lover would drink feeling dazed, - - - - - -pure artistry to write such lines and draw the reader into this scene
All time beauty from Rilke. Enjoyed the essence of a nice poem.
'As in sleeping-drink spices softly she loosens in the liquid-clear mirror her fatigued demeanor; and she puts her smile deep inside' - a fantastic introduction indeed!
The sadness of reality emerging from the mystery of reflection.
Fascinating stuff...a read that draws one on for more.
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