Fair Well

The moon sets creepy some how,
long shadows pass just threw me,
engines turned on full,
I waiting just for you,
darkness passes into light,
creepy, can't you just make up your mind,
you say yes,
then say no,
will you every just let him go,
just waiting on an answer,
let me go,
goodbye and fair well.

by Walter C. Edwards

Comments (3)

There was an English translation in this before him, and it sounds better than this.
Its not like Ezra gave this poem a new face, it is the same as Li Po wrote it. I just wonder why he thought i would read better if he wrote it again.
Isn't it beautiful when a true poet translates another poet, thank you, Ezra!