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Last Kiss
DG (9/19/1963 / )

Last Kiss

JUST another down time to sleep
and dream about beatifull rainbows,
and a kiss from a old lover wearing
some ones eles gold, or a vision in
the dark, with a flash light in my
hand, the joke, the batteries are dead,
and so is this broken and dented love,
still, i find hope in the beginning
of it all, itz the ending that breaks
me down, and the last kiss.

User Rating: 5,0 / 5 ( 2 votes ) 3

Comments (3)

Love broken, good imagery.
Hi David, Now you sound like me. Sorry it was really sad your poem. I hope you find what your looking for. It is difficult to meet people today. Everyone is married or going out with someone. You wrote with sorrow, good imagery and form, but really sad. Take care.
A last kiss, yes the energy sapped, a feeling of being washed up on the beach, I hope that some bright spark picks you up again This is profound, it really hits the spot Well done again David Love duncan X