Last Night

Last
night
thin
rain,
gusty
wind.

Dense
sleep
doesn't
fade
a wine
hangover.

I'm talking
to her
who
rolled up
the curtains.

Are you
blind!
I
say.

By now
they're
fat
green
and skimpy
red.

by Li Ching Chao

Comments (15)

fine poem with original notes. tony
A nice poem written with a sweet style. Enjoyed.
A familiar feeling long on style, short on words.
Such a great poem by Li Chomg Chao👍👍👍
nice style of writing- Huh- last night no light in dark at bed park was silence you or me at grey eyed no romance no sense but in best friend give the dawn in my mind O my love leave all flirt! ///////// just ........!
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