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Last Thoughts
CS (4/21/90 / USA)

Last Thoughts

Poem By Cynthia Sok

Go to bed and never wake up
breathe your last breath
cry your last tears
remember the good times
the laughters
of your crushes
remember the hard times
the misery
the depressions
ransack your mind
for all of these memories
remember the hugs and kisses
the mistakes of life
remember these
because you'll dream for eternity
death has taken you from your peaceful sleep
and it won't let you go

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Comments (1)

Dear Cynthia, In my humblest of opinions this is definitely your bravest effort of the ones I have read thus far. It demonstrates wisdom beyond your years. I wasn't doing this edgier stuff until much later in life. Especially loved the 'ransack your mind' line. A very shiny 9 from me. Gregory