Life Is A Dance In The Rain

It's raining, it's quiet, only i can hear the rain,
Freshness of air is invading my breath,
The echo of drops falling, the purity of the sky,
It's giving me peace and relieves my pain.

by Cristina Teodor Click to read full poem

Comments (9)

Enjoy life, live fully every moment you can, Do not waste those exciting moments, Come with me and let's dance, Life is a dance in the rain. //// penned beautiful poem; thanks for sharing
Beautiful poem...tinged with Romanticism!
The very title is so very poetic and naturally the whole poem. thank you
The Sky Get Open and Cry, Great metaphor.
Enjoy life, live fully every moment you can, Do not waste those exciting moments, Come with me and let's dance, Life is a dance in the rain. Such a wonderful and very positive attitude.... marvelous. thank you very much. dancing along the nature only to hug all that beauty and drink in till one is satisfied. thank you very much for this poem. tony
Enjoy life, live fully every moment you can, Do not waste those exciting moments, Come with me and let's dance, Life is a dance in the rain. Beautifully done poem with real feelings of dance in rain.I enjoyed it a lot.Well expressed.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
yes, life is a dance in the rain, even if it rains in Meine. even if it shines in a poetry lines!
Just like me, rain is so inspiring...and it pour some magic drops into your mind to write something like this... I love this part: 'I want to embrace the rain, And feel the drops falling on my face, I want the rain to wash away my sorrows, And let my fears run away'...the positivity is greatly bold! keep it up Cristina_Unwritten Soul
Cristina at her best. 'sky get open........mistery of life', shows the talent. Beautifully penned. drain in the rain. dance not, alone. cherish to partner in your waltz. great write. Narayanan.R