JJT (December 6,1988 / Philippines)

Life Or Death

I inquired of him the best thing
to choose: life or death.
Without a beat, he whispered 'death'.
And so I shot him;
not because he chose another...
but because he was my life.

by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

Comments (8)

nice poem nice metaphor
WOW [3 short yet powerful
One shot, one moment, One breath, between Life n death... Very nice poem..keep it up
One shot, one moment, One breath, between Life n death... Very nice poem..keep it up
Very Clever Jane..I love it
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