Limerick-The Floozy-2

There was this floozy always in good cheer
But she was not much to look at, I fear
Would sit where it's dim
To appear less grim
And waited for men who had too much beer

by Loke Kok yee

Comments (4)

as floozies 'go', this one ain't 'too bad'...............if i were living on another planet! ;) bri
In one word it's a 'Fantastc' Limerick. Shows how the knowledge of human nature pays off. Cheers for the beer. Thanks, Loke.
O dear! what a cheer! Wonderful Limerick and a wonderful picture too. Loke, i would like to give hundred marks for this poem but unfortunately, the vote button is not functioning. i have to wait till it is rectified. Apologies!
Your characters are indeed clever! By hook or by crook, 'clever' people can survive! She knows all tricks of the trade! Another outstanding limerick. Top marks!