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Lives Trapped In The Cave: ชีวิตติดในถ้ำ

Hello! we've been trying to send you a wave
We have long been trapped in the cave
It's surrounding by the water
Indeed, over here is darker
Thank you so much for resecuring us to the safe.
(Brian P.)

ติดในถ้ำค่ำเช้าคอยคนช่วย
น้ำท่วมด้วยมืดมนทนท้องหิว
แต่ปลอดภัยชีวิตไม่ปลิดปลิว
สูงสุดลิ่วเหนือเกล้ากล่าวขอบคุณ
(3/7/2018)

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Comments (17)

A witty rendition nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Prayad.
God works in mysterious ways. This prayerful poem is a gentle reminder. Congratulations on a well deserved Poem Of The Day!
A wonderful poem, I congratulate you.
A poem on an accident and rescue efforts, well in time, a well deserved selection as member's poem.
A miracle it is. 8 now rescued, not forgetting the rescuer who lost his life. The world is watching.
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