Living With A Crack

Poem By TARA.. Star

Eh! living with a crack is so hard,
How to mend a broken heart? ?

Don’t blame me! if I wrong..
Its just, Im suffering since long

Help me in finding a lost key,
Help me to forget & letting me free..

I'm confused & all this making me mad
I wish this crack, I didn’t had…

Will shine always

Comments about Living With A Crack

Cracks hurt! But at least its only a crack and its not fallen into pices. Cracks take shorter time to heal than putting pice by pice back together. good poem :)
the comment by ata my friend is so apt and true.....dont get rid of this crack..thats the essence of poetic stuff...we wont want to lose a member; -) but your lines are great...touching light and balanced liked it
Now this one is GREAT..... Love the Image os the Crack and the Lost Key... Good write..
Having a crack is very bad, hurtful. But then again, it makes us good poets at times: -) Good one Laila
You can but suffer the light it is always going to shine.. the broken heart never mends pour replacement's are my lip's...iip..much to great art thou..

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