Loneliness

Poem By Rini Shibu

When you are in the midst of darkness
Where loneliness engulfs your soul
Twinges of hopelessness felt
Chirping sound of crickets heard
The only sound to break the silence
Open the window of your heart
To see the magic in your backyard
The most fascinating view on earth
Hundreds of shimmering fireflies
The glowing lights in the dark
Millions of twinkling stars in the sky
Like diamonds on black carpet
And you are the shining moon in darkness
To spread the light around.

Comments about Loneliness

like a shining moon in the darkness, the poet spreads light
The glowing lights in the dark Millions of twinkling stars in the sky Like diamonds on black carpet....// beautiful poetic expression; superb poem
Beautiful poem it is.The real happiness lies in the loneliness.
i still commented on LON LI NESS Hope you will like it RS
toooooo excellent a poem from the renowned poetess its beyond my competence to comment hte moon the stars and you how in loneliness can live all of you


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