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Lonely Moon

The Moon will shine,
Without your smile,
But no longer shall it be,
A Moon that shines for me,
Gone are the days,
When you'd just stay,
So close, smiling at me.

The Moon is cold,
So I am told,
And winter's here for me,
When love is gone,
There is no Sun,
The Moon is all I see.

Oh lonely Moon, my lonely Moon,
Poor orphan in the sky,
Detached from mother Earth,
Your barren surface has no life,
No hope, no love, no mirth.

Oh Moon alone,
Made out of stone,
Rotating in the sky,
A phantom ship,
No life to grip,
No tears to even cry,
No one can feel your loneliness,
As deeply as can I.

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The Moon is cold/So I am told/And winter's here for me/When love is gone/There is no Sun/The Moon is all I see.....captivating poetic expression! A brilliant poem that drags me to relish its great rhythm time and again to my utmost pleasure! A sparking piece of diamond!
A powerful poetic performance. I really enjoyed every line.
A unique stand alone poem that magnifies a reader's enjoyment after every viewing. It's captivating, sad, enchanting and enthralling all at the same time. A modern day classic, written with such heart-felt tragedy and beauty. Simply wondrous. I thank you again Sandra
Sandra, this is a classic poem. It is so lyrical. What a great song it would make.
A wondrous poem. Brilliantly imagined and written with such clarity, it simply flows and that added touch of being sprinkled with star-dust, like icing on a cake. Thank you for writing and sharing this Sandra.10+++ and added to my treasure chest. I thank you again.
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