Long Distance Love

dear beloved
time flies unheeded
our days apart stretched
our love tormented

by Kenneth Maswabi Click to read full poem

Comments (8)

A creative and compelling composition that is crammed with commitment. Well done!
dear beloved hold onto our love do not allow time to trick you stay away from those temptations abstain your mind from those wild thoughts never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die Beautiful love letter for the beloved. A nicely penned poem. 10+++. Subhas
dear beloved hold onto our love do not allow time to trick you stay away from those temptations abstain your mind from those wild thoughts never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die for the boat of our love is strong. you know i'm inspired and motivated. thanks for sharing
dear beloved hold onto our love do not allow time to trick you stay away from those temptations abstain your mind from those wild thoughts never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die for the boat of our love is strong. Verily, a great write........10
I like this poem so much. It speaks to the fears inherent in a long distance romance. Fears of being forgotten or replaced. Very well done. Trish
A niece poem that shows the undeniable temptations that lovers must conquer! Thanks
Great poem. It reaffirms our faith in the bonds of love even in the face of adverse circumstances. Thanks for sharing the poem on PH.
Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.