Long Forgotten [my Space-Time Continuum]

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by Val Tkk

Comments (5)

Valsa, you have my vote of confidence... great writting! ! Brian
A very grown up poem, evocative and stirring, without missing a beat to stop and explain where the sadness stems from. Good work girl! Keep it up: O)
I forgot to mention how I loved the title - and how it adds depth to the text.
I can't make it to India to give you a hug, though I'd like to. But I can give you this vote: I'm confident this is a lovely poem. The imagery is perfect, moving, elegant, touching. It's an absolutely wonderful poem. Sweet sorrow for the reader, and - dare I hope? - a solace for the writer, seeing that your yearning yields - art.
SO VERY SAD..SO VERY GRAPHIC...SO VERYGOOD! I LIKE THIS A LOT VALSA...THIS PIECE RESONATES A DOVE-FEATHERED FLOW FROM FIRST TO LAST LINE...IN FACT, & ABSTRACTLY SPEAKING, YOUR POEM OF DEEP SADNESS FORMS A TEARDROP...BY YOUR DESIGN? ...EITHER WAY IT'S QUASI APROPOS...KEEP THAT PEN PUMPIN', VALSA! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''