Lost

Lost in a world, that scares me to death,
Lost in a crowd, I'm losing my breath.
Lost as a boy, lost as a man,
I need to grow up, don't think I can.

by Dan Brown Click to read full poem

Comments (37)

Lost in a straight world, and I am gay, Lost now, for what to say, Lost in boredom, think I'll leave. There's a lot in life I need to achieve. great poem; for such a great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
all the lost feelings I felt it here :)
beautiful poem that got me emotional... even though I am female I understand where you are coming from... for I live a non-straight life... but your poem has spoken to me...in ways I needed keep writing
An emotional sad feelings filled poem...leaves a reader with a lot to talk about.10++++
Butt you
i can totally relate to this, but i believe we all find our way in the end
Where are you now? ...That is always also my question...Very deeply portrayed...I do salute your courage and openess! A big 10 for you, Dan...you can also visit my Shattered. Thanks, Cheryl
a very sad and emotionally charged poem with a knowing ending?
Outstanding! ! ! Poem! So Moving! So Deeply Heart Touching! ! ! Thank You so much for sharing this write! ! !
it's low tone draws out my compassionate side but, the end tells me they don't stay down for long as they still hve the spark of grit and will inside of them. May their rise be quicker than the fall
Loaded with looseness is this creative, candid and compelling composition!
Beautiful, I hate that there is so much sadness, I just want to give you a hug.. but the strength is in the struggle and in Your ability to verbalize and identify your feelings. Such a beautiful poem.
lovely but very sad.. very good with words and expressing yourself i like it alot.
Fluid movement - nice rhythm - one is glad to arrive at the end stanza which clinches the poetic passion and overrides the man's deception. Perhaps it could be called a poem of Hope. Nice work. Panmelys
This is really great.. kudos!
this is a super good poem
The more desperate u are, more hopeful u become....nice write up
great poem, keep writing
This is my favourite line: 'Lost as a boy, lost as a man, '
wow that brought a tear to my eye thats were i am lost and looking for a way out beautiful