Poem By Carrilyn Fitch

I remember a time
A long time ago
I loved you once
I didnt know how to tell you
I wanted to hold your hand
I wanted to feel you touch
One time I got to hold you
I felt so wonderful
But you pushed me away
So I backed off
You loved another
But it didnt last
Now you love someone new
I see your works of art
There all of love
But who?
Is it me?
Could you possibly love me?
But I cant love you
Not right now
If it is me would you be able to wait?

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I feel the experience you have captured here is one all can relate too, with the exception of the foolish and the lucky.

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A mask so that people wont see
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