(love) A Kiss
A kiss down by the riverside,
When the waterspouts
Comes to life
And across the evergreen glide.
by K. Jared Hosein
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Inguruwattadewage Pushpadewa Chaminda
12 Nov 2018 10:57
dear poet the poem word order is very nice thank
20 Mar 2006 02:01
Brilliant use of feelings using both the tactile and the visual. Also rhythmically hypnotic word repetition.
19 Mar 2006 10:04
Nicely done, Jared... dan
18 Mar 2006 10:08
Nicely done so right, rightly done by light. You write well, and you are right. To each their own, it's how you put your spin on looks of others. Best regards-Mike Gale.
18 Mar 2006 04:53
Really liked this poem. :) Awesome choice of words.
14 Mar 2006 11:11
Oh! what a marvelous eternal kiss you are describing.Splendid K.................
11 Mar 2006 03:00
I enjoy your romantic poems particularly. This is stunning.