(love) A Kiss

A kiss down by the riverside,
When the waterspouts
Comes to life
And across the evergreen glide.

by K. Jared Hosein Click to read full poem

Comments (7)

dear poet the poem word order is very nice thank
Brilliant use of feelings using both the tactile and the visual. Also rhythmically hypnotic word repetition.
Nicely done, Jared... dan
Nicely done so right, rightly done by light. You write well, and you are right. To each their own, it's how you put your spin on looks of others. Best regards-Mike Gale.
Really liked this poem. :) Awesome choice of words.
Oh! what a marvelous eternal kiss you are describing.Splendid K.................
I enjoy your romantic poems particularly. This is stunning.