SM (Apr 02,1976 / California)

Love And Me

All of the men in my life have given me a ticket on the same flight
of life in plight. What a fool I am to accept the men with no love in them. The vacation I tend with all of the men that I always defend
even after we end, what a fool I am to always pretend that my loving them would change anything about my treatment by them.

I never seem to count the cost of each part of me I've lost. Trying to stay in relationships that should have never began as though I owed it to them, was the sin that caused my heart to be singed. I thought by loving with all that was inside of me they would see the beauty within & stay with me until the end, but what a fool I had been by loving them.



Sharmila Martin 06-09-06

User Rating: 5 / 5 ( 0 votes ) 2

Comments (2)

your poem so much deep feeling inside when love is right you can feel it hit you so deep dwon below, , when love is orginal you feel hapiness daily..when love is pure you can touch the world of reality with your man...now the question is why waiting to get so many ticket of exit..when things is right it is right..when things is not match no use of trying.i enjoy your poem so much thanx
never seem to count the cost of each part of me I've lost. Trying to stay in relationships that should have never began as though I owed it to them, was the sin that caused my heart to be singed. I thought by loving with all that was inside of me they would see the beauty real love in words makes alovely poem and it is deep and deep