~love Goes~

The feeling's closer now than then
on whispered touch around and in,
Once pale desire now crimson flush
does twist within and off then rush...

In little time the seconds tick
love's fleeting smile and subtle trick,
However deep a love will go,
true love is dead and I should know.

1-18-06

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Thank you so much Tai for reading my poem, and for your concern. This is fictional, though I think we all at times have felt love's sting. Take care :) Kim
I am sorry for your loss Kim. Great little poem, I enjoyed it, but I don't believe love ever dies. Smiling at you with a 10 from Tai