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Love Is Love No More
UES (01.12.1957 / PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA)

Love Is Love No More

Poem By UNNIKRISHNAN E S

"Do you not love me anymore? " She asked.
"Why? " He was taken aback.
"I had added extra salt in the curry deliberately,
But you did not even shout at me" she said.

"Oh! I thought I'd be polite
To you for the day,
For it is your birthday today",
He felt relieved.

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Very deep and passionate creation elegantly crafted with artistic brilliance. Your diction is a complete delight. Thanks for sharing, Unnikrishnan. Remain enriched.
A beautiful poem on love through conversation has been delineated by you touchingly, dear ES, in such a way that it is too interesting to read over and over again. A lovely poem on love..10
Enjoyed this interesting poem.
Such an endearing little poem, Unni! I loved the conversation. A truth of life and love!
A trivial incident in every day life says a lot. How people react to situations reveals their psyche. A good comment on love and its imperfection n unpredictability.
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