Love Is Love No More

"Do you not love me anymore? " She asked.
"Why? " He was taken aback.
"I had added extra salt in the curry deliberately,
But you did not even shout at me" she said.

"Oh! I thought I'd be polite
To you for the day,
For it is your birthday today",
He felt relieved.


Comments (4)

Enjoyed this interesting poem.
Such an endearing little poem, Unni! I loved the conversation. A truth of life and love!
A trivial incident in every day life says a lot. How people react to situations reveals their psyche. A good comment on love and its imperfection n unpredictability.
Wow lovely poem.. True love is loving someone in spite of thier imperfections and mistakes. +++10