MG (? / Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.)

Love, Love, Love-Thank God.

Love, love, love...
Thanks goes to the all mighty one from up above.
You've brought my mate just to my side...
You've led the spiritual path for your son's holy guided stride.
He gave up his life for your good holy loved wide spread word...
Many people were forgiven,
of this fact forgiven ex-sinners have world widely heard.
Fate united me to my bride...
Cupid's arrow gave me such a wonderful wild crazy ride.
Thank God...
Amen!

User Rating: 3,9 / 5 ( 4 votes ) 5

Comments (5)

This poem has a nice flow and is well wrote. So to me it is a ten.
I loved that poem. I say it was a ten.
Lucky man. Congrats. You may like my 'Wife of Valor' piece. Here is my love poem. I tried using the Raven's challenging rhyme pattern: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/love-is-105/ Even though it didn't quite fit, the result was good enough to inspire me to move on to my second (and still my best work: SUNRISE ON THE MOUNT) : http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/sunrise-on-the-mount/
Nice true poem about the love.So enjoyable to read!
NICE WORK MIKE...A FINE TRUE STORY OF 2 FINE PEOPLE '''''''''''''''''''FRANK