Mrs Moon

Mrs Moon
sitting up in the sky
little old lady
with a ball of fading light
and silvery needles
knitting the night

by Roger McGough

Comments (3)

The first four stanzas don't do much for me. There are some lines that I think are really strong, but most don't interest me. But that last stanza is vivid and visceral. The pacing is so interesting, with a wonderful balance of long and short phrases, and sentences that begin or end in unusual places. But it's the language there that really gets to me. In the convulsive rapture of a kiss. So intense!
This poem is so gay i have cancer. Kill yourself
sorry, but i got bored after the first stanza and didn't read on even though i tried.