Love, Your Heart

Love, your heart is mine,
kneading it I'll refine
the threads of your design.
I must remove its roughness
increasing its smoothness,
I shall enhance its grace.

by Neela Nath Das

Comments (3)

Truly said - love is the smoother that removes the roughness thanks Max rating for the content :
kindness and softness engraved in mind enriched with love removes roughness of heart - I love it
The idea of kneading a heart, removing its roughness, increasing its smoothness and finally enhancing its grace, seems to me a motherly job for a son or a daughter. Liked this lovely poem.