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Would you go with me in an ocean of dreams
in a submarine of our subconscious
travelling through our night time rest
until we resurface in the morning

Would you help me navigate
and avoid the rocks of our nightmares
they want to tear straight through the hull
and claim us when we drown

Would you watch as visions pass us by
going to a destination unknown
maybe we could follow them one night
and learn more about what we see

Would you go with me in a ocean of dreams
in a submarine of our subconscious
going through the day anticipating
what wonders we will experience together

by Jaden Knight

Comments (8)

Silvia, I can't imagine Love as a virus, hope it is not like one of those that have not cure the type you just die in pain....Great work, keep it up...Peace, Romeo, NYC...
The title links up with the virus and the idea is really good. You have real talent Silvia!
i love this one. you have the element to be great, keep on silvia.
gostei ^^ i really like it
n ice poems..........
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