(18.11.1973 / Romania)

Magic Lies In Silence Of Grass And In Your Voice

I am barefoot walking in the grass of morning,
The dew drops are comforting my feet,
I felt relieved by my stress and grief,
When i heard your voice in the grass rustling.

I lie down on grass and i could feel its silence,
I close my eyes and i enjoyed your voice,
The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind,
Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice.

Is amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass,
Opening my eyes i saw above the sky,
There was your face among the clouds smiling,
I had the feeling that i want to hug the sky.

I'm gonna miss you all the days of life,
And even when death will take my last breath,
Last thing i'll do passing to eternity,
I'm gonna miss you.

Winter will come, grass will fall asleep,
I 'll not hear the grass rustling anymore,
Only my memories with you will be always alive,
Rustling in my mind as grass did.

by Cristina Teodor

Comments (44)

Wonderfully written I am barefoot walking in the grass of morning, The dew drops are comforting my feet, I felt relieved by my stress and grief, When i heard your voice in the grass rustling.— when you are close to nature you are relieved of all stress and grief. Nice.
Very spiritual...Lovely poem... a ten from me and congratulations..
I lie down on grass and i could feel its silence, I close my eyes and i enjoyed your voice, The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind, Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice. miracle in the bleade of grass, the joy of the wonder of silence, wings of the wind, smelling clouds.. such fine images gathered and packed in this poem.. poetic sense is throughout the poem. thank u. tony
True love always remains fresh and let you feel better. You keep listening his voice even everything is silent around you. Very very nice. Enjoyed. Congrats.
...When I heard your voice in the grass rustling/I lie down on grass and I could feel its silence/I close my eyes and I enjoyed your voice...........I imagine the way you have extracted the mysterious voice in the great ambience of tranquility! Many congratulations for this elegant piece of poetry being chosen as POD!
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