Magic Lies In Silence Of Grass And In Your Voice

I am barefoot walking in the grass of morning,
The dew drops are comforting my feet,
I felt relieved by my stress and grief,
When i heard your voice in the grass rustling.

by Cristina Teodor Click to read full poem

Comments (67)

A poignant write, the rhythmic repetition of imagery continuously reinforcing the theme in every stanza. Congratulations on this poem of the day.
Tenderly feeling that ran through veins while reading through the touching poem, kept me wondering as to who parted from whom. Nevertheless, paraphrasing with nature's events and things makes poem sensational. Congrats for being the member's PoD. Thanks for sharing. X
Good write! Touching and deep! TY! 10+++ and congrats for Poem of the DAY! m
God write! Touchnig and deep! TY! 10+++ and congrats for Poem of the DAY!
Beautiful and very touching, It makes me wonder did he die or did something else happen? The most evoking part of this poem is the passion of the speaker, the repetitions of Im gonna miss you really convey just how important this person was and is to the speaker. amazing work~
WOW, Beautiful. Enjoying your lines very much. I felt relieved by my stress and grief, When i heard your voice in the grass rustling. I lie down on grass and i could feel its silence, I close my eyes and i enjoyed your voice, The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind, Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice.
Extremely beautiful, heart moving, lovely poem.
your poem is so beautiful. I like it. thanks for sharing.
fragrance of grass was taken on the wings of wind.very good description..silence in the voice .that is the sound of silence.Voice of loved one soothes one's mind.Like thunder, it is so loud but silences and comforts and reassures a disturbed mind and reassures about a cosmic presence beyond the selfish designs of human on earth. She saw face of her loved on I, smiling in the sky.very nice poem
wow..... I love it this poem so much, nice work dear.... keep writing.
a well meant love poem of longing for someone who has now departed? ..............wonderfully written
Such a comforting poem... Congrats, Cristy for being chosen.. Rated 10+++++
This is really a beautiful poem on nature and love having stunning and thrilling expression. Reading of this poem gives euphonious tone in mind. Thanks for sharing and congratulation for the poem of the day. A..10
This poem is really beautiful. This should be 'poem of the year! ! Impressive!
A wonderfully worded poem by Christina. An apt selection for being the poem of the day. The poet deserves every praise for this beautiful work of hers. Congratulations for being selected as poet of the day!
Congrats for the POTD honor for this beautiful poem, Thanks for sharing..10
Hi Tina, Congratulations on being selected Poet of the Day. Memories with you will be always alive Rustling in my mind as grass did Beautiful poem Enjoyed reading.10+
Excellent choice for Poem of the day. Wonderful work, Cristina!
'Rustling in my mind as the grass did'. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind, Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice. Wonderful imagery and reflection of impressions. Heartiest Congrats on that count as also on member poet of the Day.