DB (4/30/1991 / manhatten)


i am me the one you know
as David you call me funny you
call me genius you call me
a gentlemen you call me names
upon names and nick names
but what does it all mean
it means everything you have
said to me everything you
think of me what are you
describing? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
is it my personality my looks
my aura your opinions
what you heard
what you see or is it
what you know........
none of those are what you are
really describing because you
are describing me my soul the very
essence of who i am and
that is all there is ME! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Comments (1)

It seems like you enjoy writing in a stream of consciousness style. Then it seems like you took some ideas off the classics, such as e. e. cummings or William Carlos Williams. I don't quite know what to think of you. It seems like your themes only reflect a very American philosophy of the individual, and you also take a very modern/postmodern idea of love. I'll keep reading and see what I think.