Charlie Hebdo Haiku

this winter's row
candlss light up
paris streets

this winter's row
to the bone

this winter's row
the prophrt's image
spells death

by john tiong chunghoo

Comments (3)

Very nice imagery. Your English is serviceable.
Very delicate thoughts, apt imagery and good expression. Thanks for this poem and please continue writing them.
Don't worry about your vocabulary. Ordinarily, I don't care for Luv Pomes, but this one is expressive, with just the right amount of delicacy.