MCP ( / Portugal)

Melody

Caring words, noble feelings, wise thoughts
Have been enchanting from afar.
A friendship so true, warm, and soft
Worth being a tune for your guitar.

We can listen to the strings echoing
Blessed melodies so high,
And telling stories of living
That joyfully reach the sky!

(March,2010)

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Comments (3)

liked these lines. We can listen to the strings echoing Blessed melodies so high, And telling stories of living That joyfully reach the sky! your poem is sweet and simple and understandable. nice. thank u for sharing invite u to read my poems and send your valuable comments
Hola Maria - A lovely poem with excellent structure and flow which makes it very reciteable. V 1 Emotion and friendship from afar - it generates a FADO 'Persona tem mais encanto - na hora da despedida'. V 2 Echoing strings - Blessed melodies - telling stories - The joy of BALLADS (These are the English version of FADO but less melancholy) . Thanks for sharing. Love through Poetry - JOHN
We can listen to the strings echoing Blessed melodies so high, And telling stories of living That joyfully reach the sky! wow what a sweet poem I have read after long time searching and its you who always writes very sweet poems with rich meaningful way and the way you write is wuite impressive and depth is making your idea more and more sweet and meaningful..well done..enjoyed this poem a lot..10/10