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Melting Shadows
( / Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

Melting Shadows

Poem By Dr subhendu kar

When smiles shocked by the furrows
yet subtle silent as when lashed
as green meadows looking luminous
like the waves reeling its head as genial

on the dunes of debris in continuum
by the sea in its side taking away shadows
the darts from blood flowing through the heart
in quest of love yet not lost to the thought

me and guilt of mine in the dead night
if ever accomplished in grey confinement
seemingly yet not subterfuge even not by pretension
as when crucified by the glooms as accrued
as flounced from the clouds tainted dark

as when beseeched upon splattering the knees
yet with folded eyes pierced by the flitting pains
when mirrored by the rays waking all the shadows
as tears deluged as if defiled by the sorrows

yet in a depth of knowing the heart as subsumed
as it reels in its path from the time waking the sun
precious moment as ice falling over trees
when detracting the sorrows by the wishes of love. divine

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yet with folded eyes pierced by the flitting pains when mirrored by the rays waking all the shadows as tears deluged as if defiled by the sorrows Meaningful verses...of your rich and deep thoughtful poem..I really enjoyed few of your poems and like most of them as you seem to me semi philosophical poet and the innovation is found in your ideas as well the way you express.. flow of poem is perfect...10+++++++++++
It's hard to believe it's time to go Leave this way of life, spread our wings and grow Say goodbye to those friends that we hold dear to our hearts Shedding tears for we'll be so far apart Remembering all the good times and even the bad Including the fights we sometimes had Through the tears and the pain Friendship was our gain We stuck together through sunshine and rain, laughs and shouts We found out what true friends were all about So as our year comes to an end We'll carry in our hearts our special friends And take with us all the memories that were made Since that very first August day.
Sometimes natures wonders can take your mind of some sorrows. sometimes? *10 *! Thad


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