MCP ( / Portugal)


She woke up in calm, thoughtful mood,
Looked at the plants around
Thanking for blessings as she could.
But she felt sad and confounded...

Major concerns echoed in her heart.
Her son, who lives afar, didn't connect...
But when he shares news with such an art
She dreams of a new, exciting project.


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Moods contribute to the creation of good poetry. As your rather pensive mood did here. Always happy to read you, Maria. Love, Sandra
Hola Maria - Sou agradado par ser primiero commentar neste poema encantador. You must excuse my Portugese it is really fractured Spanish. This is a nice poem with excellent structure - rhyme - rhythm. The content and use of English is also very good. It is lovely to wake up in a spirit of relection but it is often tinged with sadness. I have three absent children (50 - 48 - 44) and they can both exasperate and enthuse us. Our enviroment - our friends - our family all contibute to our mood swings each day. Thanks for sharing - Love through Poetry - JOHN.