Z Breakup - Haiku

I hear their shouting
Their friendship is now over
Her dented car door

by stewart green

Comments (11)

the moon understands dark places. the moon has secrets of her own. ———— Girlhood experience revealed in the background of the moon.. Terrific.
the moon is queen of everything. she rules the oceans, rivers, rain. when I am asked whose tears these are I always blame the moon........beautiful expression with nice theme. Brilliant write.
A powerful, biting work that explores how children find refuge from horrors over which they have no control. To be able to project our pain onto something distant and objective in order to survive the painful reality of that which is close and familiar. Terrific writing; necessarily horrible subject.
The moon understands dark places! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A translation of the poem in Hindi/Urdu here - https: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/moonchild-a-poem-by-lucille-clifton-in-hindi-urdu-translation/
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