You Are One Creature

Lets talk about the sun
the shining the light gives
and the beauty of the day
Lets talk about the moon
the pleasant look
uncountable stars and the
beauty
Lets talk about you
your manner of understanding
your Illuminating spirit
your wise words
and your gift of beauty

by Oluwadamilare Adedayo

Comments (13)

Darkness and moonless night, nicely used as metaphors.
A great tribute to the god
A nice tribute to the almighty!
A nice tribute to the almighty!
Very tight poem, expressing an intense devotion humbly yet eloquently (and it's not easy to use thou art and thou wert and still sound natural) . Hopkins is a master, and this poem is delightful to contemplate.
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