Should I Say Yes?

Poem By nisha dyrene

If love were like water
I'd build you a fountain,
And if love were like stone
I'd bring you a mountain.
If love were like air
I'd set whirlwinds free,
But as these are not love
I'll just give you me.


Comments about Should I Say Yes?

oh and I would give it a multitude of tens if one were allowed to- - so since I cannot I will give it a 5 star rating
Sometimes you fall in love with a poem the instant you read it and all you want to do is read it again and again- -well, I have fallen in love with this one and shall sit here and reread it over and over again.
That is the real sign of true love not all about materialism everytime nice one Pls comment on my work IGARA CHICKEN
this was a great poem and I like it
I wish poems could be more than 5 stanzas

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