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My Ardent Desire
DP (June12,1966 / Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India))

My Ardent Desire

I'd like to love you as you are,
The way you love' and live' so far.
I like the way you've taken care
Of me, an' kids just being so fair

I'd like to sing a song of love,
The pious bond of all above;
For years and years until I die,
Until the sun brightens the sky.

I'd like You love me as I do
With all my virtues and vices, too.
Let us unite and take a vow
To love and live in peace from now.

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Lovely, fascinating poem, Dear Poet! The opening line impresses me - I'd like to love you as you are - beautiful! I have to say - Your wife is a fortunate lady! Enjoy reading your poems!
I'd like You love me as I do With all my virtues and vices, too. Let us unite and take a vow To love and live in peace ALWAYS XXXXXfrom now.? ? ? ? ? Such love is rare today some poets betray read each one and to them say love your wife keep off your eyes from mine
What a lovely thing to give as gift! A gift that means well, and comes from heart but with enough art to make it endearing. Beautiful.
Superb poem. This is how love, true love is. Inspiring and touching.
Great love! You have perfectly expressed your love and compassion to your dearly beloved wife in this piece of treasure...10++++++++++++
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