MC (4/1/90 / Tennessee)

My Best Nightmare

I opened my eyes
And felt my self falling.
I landed on hard ground and maoned
And started crawling.
I looked up
Into a blood red sky.
And screamed in terror
As a jet black crow flew by.
I tried to stand up
And fell back down in pain.
I decided just to lay there
Instead of hurting myself in strain.
I crawled an inch
And lost my breath.
I knew that I
Was near my death.
And then behind me
I heard a sound.
I didn't look back
Just to the ground.
A hand then touched
My injured shoulder.
Then everything around me
Got even colder.
The noise I heard
Became a familiar tone.
I then had the strength to turn around
And a ring around him shone.
I felt relief
Even through the pain.
I then had another
Friend to gain.
God had come to save me.
He wouldn't let me die.
He lifted me and my pain left.
Then we flew into the sky.

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Comments (1)

Nice ending, very discriptive, praise God for safe passage through our trials in life! I wish you well and God bless...