My Dog Rover

Poem By Jamie Parker

My dog is called Rover
He likes to play
Every day!
He likes to walk
And rabbits he chases
He likes with the other dogs, to do lots of races!
He black and brown
With Amber eyes
He's stealthy... he'd make a good spy
He likes to shake paws
He likes to bark
And in the forest... he leaves his mark
I like my dog
He's quick
And fun
And sometimes jumps over my Mum!
(not)

Comments about My Dog Rover

Poor spelling poor structure good content and some good words
Sorry But that's all I could think of!
tisk tisk, im a fan of honest in poetry >: (
Rover doesn't actully jump over my Mum! That sentence was just for fun! (:


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