YF ( / New Rochelle)

Alone Looking At The Mountain

All the birds have flown up and gone;
A lonely cloud floats leisurely by.
We never tire of looking at each other -
Only the mountain and I.

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Comments (2)

well penned down. great composition
Nice metaphor, nicely composed, touchy also. 10 with pleasure.