My Life

My life
I would like to describe it
as it's the foundation and facade
of my existence
the roots of my being
that was born with me
and shall die with me

My life
that until death
will be connected with earth
but that after my last sigh
will leave to a place
where no one
ever from returned
some call it heaven
others hell
but true as that maybe
it won't be place
where my life ones started

User Rating: 4,8 / 5 ( 5 votes ) 6

Other poems of ODEKERKEN (1230)

Comments (6)

it's the foundation and facade of my existence the roots of my being that was born with me and shall die with me... a philosophy of life and death and after life........... very nice poem. thank u dear poet. tony
Really a great poem my friend... What you are it will be with you, yes, eternally.... And we can see that you are poetry! A great hug from Brazil!
An introspective reflection on life and death. Excellent write!
After my last sigh! With the struggles of life. Nice piece.
Wow! This poem is absolutely amazing! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and love how you depicted your life here so realistically and simple. What a great tribute to your life! Especially loved: but true as that may be it won't be the place where my loved ones started. Very touching poem Mario! Thank you, RoseAnn
See More