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My Mother - A Fantastic Blossom,

My mother - a fantastic blossom,
like on a flowerbed - lies on the couch.
She has the sound of girlish voices
of twenty years when she talks.

she has so many intonations
as happy as from native fields,
and when she laughs in conversations -
the world smiles at me with more gleam! -

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wow fantastic poem a tribute poem on mother; like this style
Good use of imagery. Lovely and very passionate tribute to a loving mum, nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Liza and do remain blessed.
Good piece! Mother; our first love
Overt love of every child about mom, our mother is the best, nice poem perfect 10
Such a thoughtful tribute to mother!
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